2019江蘇高考英語作文超精講

　　高考英語作文多增10分的勁爆預測!

【預測話題】

傳統文化

【預測題目】

假如你叫李華，你的美國筆友Tom對中國的傳統節日非常感興趣。他想請你介紹你最喜歡的一個節日，如中秋節、端午節、春節等，你通常是怎麼慶祝的，以及你喜歡這個節日的原因。請你根據他的問題回覆郵件。

提示詞語：eat, get together, share, happy, special

【參考範文】

Hi! Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.

My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It usually comes in September or October. On that day, our family members usually get together and have a nice meal. After that, I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my families.

I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes. They are in the shape of a full moon. They carry people’s wishes to the families they love and miss. In short, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a day of pleasure and happiness.

I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals.

Yours,

Li Hua

2017年高考英語寫作極有可能採用應用文進行考查，比如留言條。

【預測作文】留言條

【預測題目】

假設你是高三學生李華，星期天你要和你的同班同學李明一起去敬老院參加義務勞動，你去找他，但他沒有在家，你給他留言說明要求，內容如下：

(1)9：30在學校門口集合;

(2)帶勞動工具(洗衣粉、理髮工具、除草工具等);

(3)自帶午飯，騎自行車前往。

注意：

(1)詞數100左右;

(2)可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【參考範文】

Dear Li Ming,

This Sunday we'll go to the nursing home and do some voluntary labor. You were out, when I dropped in on you. Therefore, I had to leave a message to you.

We'll meet at the gate of our school at 9:30 tomorrow morning and start out together by bike. So you should take your bike. And don't forget to take some washing powder, barber tools and weeding tools so that we can help them with washing clothes, cutting their hair and get rid of some weed in the garden. At last, you should remember to take some food for lunch because we'll stay there for chatting with them at noon.

If you come back, please phone me at once.

Yours

Li Hua

共享單車無疑是今年的火爆熱點之一，它爲我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。語文高考作文話題都有：共享單車。

【預測話題】共享單車

【預測題目】

假定你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的美國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國新近出現的一種共享單車“mobike”很感興趣，並請你做個簡要介紹。請你給Jim回信，內容包括：

1. 這種單車的使用方法(如：APP查看車輛、掃碼開鎖等);

2. 這種單車的優勢;

3. 你對這種單車的看法。

注意：1. 詞數100左右;

2. 開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

提示詞：智能手機 smartphone, 二維碼 the QR code

【參考範文】

Dear Jim,

I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike--mobike mentioned in your latest letter.

It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.

Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.

Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

節約是中華人民的傳統美德，然而，當前國人的浪費現象卻十分嚴重，尤其是餐桌上的浪費。請用英語寫一篇100-120詞的短文，描述你的一次“餐桌浪費”經歷，並結合當前的“光盤行動”(Clear Your Plate Campaign)略加評論。

With large amounts of food thrown away each year, the problem of food waste is widespread in China. Last Spring Festival, my father invited several friends to dinner in a restaurant. My father ordered a lot to show respect and display generosity.

What surprised me was he ordered an extra dish before we could finish all! When we stood up to leave, there were many dishes unfinished. Out of embarrassment, my father was reluctant to take the leftovers home. Later, we all shared the opinion that it was a great waste.

Recently, the Clear Your Plate Campaign started nationwide. I firmly believe that if everyone does his bit, the food waste will be significantly reduced.

n the bike, and enjoy your trip.

Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.

Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

　　2019江蘇高考英語作文超精講

我對作文的一點看法

轟轟烈烈的英語考試拉下帷幕了。目前我只知道寫作題，這已經足夠了。下面我就來寫一篇吧。

總體感覺是：今年作文有話可寫，但不容易寫好，因爲需要積累不少和銷售有關的表達。譬如如何表達商品銷售、產品質量、誤導等等。還有邏輯，如果你寫反對，譬如如何論證排名會誤導消費者，你就要舉例等，蠻考驗考生的邏輯思維能力的。

今年作文和模塊四的第一單元話題比較靠近的，這個模塊的詞塊對寫作也有很大幫助。利弊類作文江蘇已經出現過兩年了，對於掌握了這兩年範文的考生，起碼在正文的結構上胸有成竹。

另外，本次作文題一個特點是：

短文簡單易懂。這和去年的是一樣(去年對話也是一看就懂，短小，不浪費時間)。這就是提示我們，平時練習不要在提供的短文上設置難度，尤其不可有生詞，長度和難度是今後命題的一個重點。

過幾天我會就整套試卷來一個全方位評析，包括寫作。本篇只說如何寫。

注意：範文屬於本人寫作王中王一書，版權所有，請勿商用。

2018江蘇考生注意：現在可以準備六級考試了，我明天晚上在滬江直播間公益講座，談六級備考(翻譯、寫作、閱讀)，請關注我微信朋友圈通知。文末有說明。

題目

第五部分：書面表達(滿分25分)

請閱讀下面文字，並按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

Li Jiang 6 July, Sunny

Our family will go on a trip next month and need asuitcase. Two days ago. Mom asked me to find relevant information on theinternet. But the information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we ordered the one we were satisfied with. Thisafternoon, Mom received the case and told me she liked it very much.

Su Hua 6 July, Sunny

This morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complaineda lot, and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. Iwas puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?

【寫作內容】

1.用約30個詞概括上述利用排名( ratings)進行消費的現象;

2.談談你如何看待消費排名，然後用2-3個理由或論據支撐你的看法。

【寫作要求】

1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句;

2.作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱;

3.不必寫標題

【評分標準】

內容完整，語言規範，語篇連貫，詞數適當。

一、如何寫概括：

1.題乾的關鍵詞

關鍵詞：排名( ratings)進行消費，這就是概括的核心。

2.段落的關鍵詞

對於記敘文，一般有兩種情況，一是舉例;二是通篇一個故事。對於前者，只需要知道例子說明什麼論點，對於後者，需要知道主要角色做了什麼事，帶來什麼結果。

結合題幹可知，要求概括現象，即兩個例子說明了什麼現象。切忌寫例子裏面的每個人發生了什麼事。

兩個故事都是對ratings的評價，第一個的評價：like it; 第二個評價：complaining。

3.關鍵詞的替換

1. like it--> produce positive effects, a good impression

2. complain --> don’t meet needs, negativ eeffects, mislead

基本上概括不需要很複雜的句型，主要是把大意說明白：

先看2015年真題概括示範：

The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It notonly affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’s lives. The threeselections presented above are typical examples.

我的寫法：

Ratings for commodities are a double-edged can help consumers make sound decisions, but sometimes mislead them and bring about complaints. The two stories presented above are typical examples. (30個詞)

我的心得：

針對現象的概括，不要具體寫內容，重點是：現象是什麼，一般都是什麼趨勢;結果或評價是什麼，一般都是帶來什麼影響，支持或反對。

二、如何寫正文

談利弊的文章，江蘇已經有兩年了，分別是2016年的網絡投票和2014年的漢語詞典是否可以有英語單詞。如果考生熟悉的話，會容易上手。

思維：我這裏以反對爲例：

1.從政府角度(可能涉及到法規，監管)：

缺乏具體法規(there areno laws or policies and supervision)來規範市場排名

2.從商家的角度(可能涉及到責任)：

過多廣告投入，而不是質量(give priority to ads)

3.從個人角度：

盲目隨大流(follow the crowd blindly)

思維有了，但還需要整合的：

前兩個要點可以合併，政府缺少法規，導致商家可以不擇手段來提高排名。其實也可以舉例，譬如百度競價排名，但寫起來不容易。

關鍵是如何論證消費者只是盲目隨大流，考生可能有兩種思考：

1.消費者想當然認爲排名代表了質量—》實際上質量高的很多產品因爲投入不高無法參加排名

2. 消費者想當然認爲排名代表了受歡迎度—》實際上產品只是定製部分消費者的，他們的體驗被誇大而影響別人

第一個論據和前面第一個論點重複了，因爲前面說的是質量，這裏還是說質量;第二個論據就比較切合文章的第二個例子：the food was not to our taste.

I don’t support such ratings. First, the absence of policies and supervisions allows producers to earn high ratings by all means. Chances are that top priority is given to advertisement, which is an open invitation to misleading information. Eventually, ratings rely heavily on investment inadvertisement rather than the quality of services. Besides, it is not uncommon for individuals to follow the crowd blindly without critical take it for granted that ratings definitely equal popularity. Actually, many products are targeted at special consumers, whose experience tends to be exaggerated and influences others.

So, it is safe to conclude that ratings of purchases, if not handled properly, weigh against the development of a healthy market and cause unfair marketcompetitions

(正文130個詞)

Tips:

absence of…缺乏

也可以用：There is no…，但是這個句型我比較喜歡用抽象名詞作主語來替換，這樣就省去了一個定語從句。

w sb to do…這裏表達的是“使某人……”。表達使動概念，不一定用make。

all means無論如何。

實際上這裏我本來用by hook or by crook(不擇手段)，但考生考場上很難想到，而且不能保證閱卷人第一眼能識別出來，就捨棄了。

ces are that…有可能

這是我代替it is likely that..的一個句型，超級順手

5.表示重視的詞組：give top priority to…

此類詞組一共有32組，請參看本文：

視頻和文字 | 最後一封雞毛信的囑咐和拓展

an open invitation to很大的誘因

這是教材模塊7的一個詞塊，被我代替cause, be responsible for

heavily on過度依賴於

er than不是

9. it is not uncommon for…對於……是一個常見的現象

10. follow the crowd隨大流

11. critical thinking批判思維

12. take it for granted that…想當然認爲

13. be targeted at目標在於

14. tend to往往

15. it is safe to conclude that…可以穩妥得出這樣結論……

16. if not handled properly，省略句結構

17. weigh against對……不利

末段也是借鑑2016年和2014年的範文：

In short, internet voting, to someextent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be efore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in oursociety should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere andearnest.

So, it’s safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitatesdaily communication.

完整的文章：

Ratings for commodities are a double-edged can help consumers make sound decisions, but sometimes mislead consumers and bring about complaints. The two stories presented above are typical examples.

I don’t support such ratings. First, the absence of policies and supervisions allows producers to earn highratings by all means. Chances are that top priority is given to advertisement, which is an open invitation tomisleading information. Eventually, ratings rely heavily on investment inadvertisement rather than the quality of services. Besides, it is not uncommon for individuals to follow the crowd blindly without critical take it for granted that ratings definitely equal popularity. Actually, many products are targeted at special consumers, whose experience tends to be exaggerated and influences others.

So, it is safe to conclude that ratings of purchases, if not handled properly, weigh against the development of a healthy market and cause unfair marketcompetitions