雅思寫作考試如何精簡語句

對於雅思寫作來說，學會雅思寫作的技巧是非常重要的，這樣既能夠節省時間又容易拿高分。下文中爲大家帶來了雅思寫作考試如何精簡語句的內容，希望大家可以採納。

詞彙精簡技巧

雅思寫作精簡建議一：避免空洞的單詞和詞組

1、一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不能爲句子帶來任何相關或重要的信息，完全可以刪掉。

比如：When all things are considered， young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents， in my opinion.

這句話當中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都顯得多餘。完全可以去掉。改爲：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2、有些空洞和繁瑣的表達方式可以進行替換。

例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

“due to the fact that”就是一個很典型的繁瑣的表達方式的例子，可以替換，簡化爲下面的表達方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have now.

雅思寫作精簡建議二：避免重複

1、儘量避免重複使用同樣的詞彙。或者有的時候雖然詞彙沒有重複，但意思卻有重複。這時候可以做一些簡化的工作。

例如下面這個例子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

large對一個farm來說就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改爲：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

更簡潔的表達方式爲：

My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

2、有時一個詞組可以用一個更簡單的單詞來替換。

例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.

這裏的over and over again就可以改爲repeatedly，顯得更爲簡潔：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.

雅思寫作精簡建議三：選擇最恰當的語法結構

選擇合適的語法結構可以使句子意思的表達更爲精確和簡練。雖然語法的多樣性也很重要，但選擇最恰當的語法結構仍然是更爲重要的考慮因素。以下原則是在考慮選擇何種語法結構時可以參考的原則：

1、一個句子的主語和謂語動詞應該能夠反映句子中最重要的意思。

例如：The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

從意思上來分析，上面這句話需要表達的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”，而在表達這個概念時，原句用的主語是situation，謂語動詞是was，不能強調需要表達的重點概念，可以改爲下面這句話：

My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.

2、避免頻繁使用“there be”結構。

例如下面的句子：There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.

可以改爲：

My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.

更簡潔的句式爲：

My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

3、把從句改爲短語或單詞。

例如：Dairy cows were raised on the farm，which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an areathat was remote.

簡介的表達方式爲：

The dairy farm was located in a remotearea， 100 kilometers to the nearest university.

4、僅在需要強調賓語而不是主語的時候，才使用被動語態。

例如：In the fall， not only did the cows haveto be milked， but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather'sfamily.

本句不夠簡潔的原因是本句的重心應該是“忙碌的家庭-mygrandfather's family”，而使用了被動語態後，彷佛重心變成了cows和hay。下面的表達方式是主動語態，相對來說更簡潔一些：

In the fall， my grandfather's family notonly milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.

5、用更爲精確的一個動詞來代替動詞短語。

例如：My grandfather didn't have time tostand around doing nothing with his school friends.

Stand around doing nothing其實可以用一個動詞來表達，即loiter：

My grandfather didn't have time toloiter with his school friends.

6、有時兩句話的信息經過組合完全可以用一句話來簡練地表達。

例如：Profits from the farm were not times they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They werenot sufficient to pay for a university degree.

兩句話的信息可以合併爲下面這句更爲簡潔的句子：

Profits from the farm were sometimes toosmall to meet operational expenses， let alone pay for a university degree.

小作文寫作技巧

1、 雅思小作文寫作結構搭建：

(1) 第一段的introduction：直接改寫題目——句型主動改被動或是反之，單詞可做稍微替換，雖然說改寫比較簡單，但是這一步驟缺一不可。一定要改寫題目，一定不能照抄。

(2) 第二段的overview：圖表中，你最先看到的，最最明顯的特徵，你這裏可以做以下稍微的總結，因爲怕你後面沒時間進行總結，小作文的時間最多隻有20分鐘，要放在大作文後面寫，很多時候大作文會佔據大於40分鐘的時間，那麼你的小作文時間就會來不及，那麼在這裏你對於最最明顯的特徵進行總結，就算到後面沒時間，也不會因爲沒有對圖表特徵進行總結而扣分。

(3) 第三段的details：圖表所提供的信息就是需要你進行對比的。對比分兩種：縱向和橫向。縱向是跟自己比，比之前自己增長了，還是下降了;橫向比是跟別人比，跟比人比我是第一還是最後。圖表中的數據信息，你無需所有的數據都寫在你的文中裏，只需要特徵明顯的，比如位於首位，位於最後這種，還有就是一定要進行對比。

(4) 如果你前面的overview段有總結了，就無需再來個結尾段了，不過要是有時間，你也可以進行一句話的結尾。

2、 雅思小作文素材積累

這邊給大家展示我自己所積累的小作文用到的素材。大家每天都拿出來看一遍，寫小作文的時候儘量用上去。

時期：from…to， between…and， over/ during the period from 1995 to 2005=over/during the period of one decade

上升：go up， climb， grow， rise， increase， ascend， show an upward trend=show an increasing/rise trend

表明/揭示：show/reveal/indicate/reflect/present/describe/illustrate/demonstrate/compare/give informationabout + n

緩慢、逐漸：slow， slowly=gradually=steadily=consistently=step by step，contious

迅速：rapid， quick， swift，sudden， sharp， dramatic

小幅度：slight(ly)， modest(ly)， moderate(ly)， marginal(ly)

大幅度、明顯：sharp，drastic， considerable， noticeable， marked， dramatic， significant， substantially，

下降：fall， go down， drop， decrease， decline， descend， dip， dipped， show a downward trend， plummet， plunge

波動：fluctuate， fluctuation，eg： rise with some fluctuation， go up and down=be unstable/flexible=be in instability/flexibility

保持平穩、不變：level out/off at + n=stabilize / hover at + n= reach a plateau at + n

Stay/keep/remain/maintain + stable/ unchanged/constant at+ n

大約：about，around， almost， nearly， roughly， approximately， just over/under…，… or so

達到最大值：reach the maximum=reach the peak/summit/culmination at + n=peak/summit/culminate at…=reach the highest point at

達到最小值： reach the minimum=reach/touch the bottom at…=bottom out at…=reach the lowest point at…

補充：according to = in accordance with= based in= in terms of =in the light of = in line with

Comparing…=compared with/to…=in comparison with…= different from…

While， whilst， whereas， yet

To conclude， in conclusion=to summarize， in summary=to sum up=all in all =overall

3、 雅思小作文寫作訓練

小作文就最適合這種模式性的訓練啦。有了上面的框架，還有就是積累各種說明文的上升下降，鉅變啥的表達。去找那些老師們整理好的資源唄，不用自己準備了，你要做的就是直接拿來用。這是站在巨人肩膀上，哈哈。

我用的是9分達人的那個母題訓練，在清楚寫作骨骼的前提下，再來補充血肉和靈魂，哈哈。然後積累範文裏面的好句子。有了骨架，寫作材料就是血和肉，你的主題思想就是寫作思路就是你整篇文章的靈魂，三者缺一不可。

一定要練習哈!三天就可以來一次訓練了，我很慶幸找到了一個一起奮鬥的小烤鴨，我們互相監督，互相批改，嚴格的時間內完成，然後兩個人進行討論修改，再寫，再改，就是這麼一路走過來的。也不要套模板吧，就是明白了寫作模式，有了框架，再加上題目的寫作思路，有了靈魂，再加上你的詞句，有了血肉，其實就是你自己的模板。這個時候你的小夥伴是很重要的，大家一起高歌歡唱，纔會讓自己走得更遠。

上述就是爲大家帶來的雅思寫作考試如何精簡語句的內容，希望可以有效幫助到大家，提升雅思寫作考試的備考能力，獲取理想的學習成績。