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如何寫好雅思寫作主題句

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雅思寫作中凸顯主題才能讓考官更加喜歡,那麼你知道怎樣寫好主題句嗎?下面小編和大家聊聊這個問題。

如何寫好雅思寫作主題句

都說雅思作文中的主題句很重要,是這樣的嗎?

雅思大作文的字數才250個,但是真正的英語議論文至少也是1000個字起。這樣看來,清晰和有條理就非常的必要,否則因爲文章太長,不少老 師,或者考官根本不會有很多心情看。主題句就是清楚明白的告訴讀者你在這段裏面要說什麼,這樣即使讀者沒有心情看完整片文章,只要看文章每段的主題句也就 能知道你每段的內容了。雅思大作文中,主題句的作用非常大。有了主題句就會是文章看起來結構清晰,重點突出,給考官留下一個好印象,當然也會使自己在寫的時候思路更加清晰,寫起來更順暢。你可以關注一下北京新東方的雅思7分寫作班,對重點寫作題目進行分題型、分背景講解,併爲學員提供答題素材,在雅思的寫作中,考官會要在幾天內看很多分考卷,如果你有很好的主題句,考官會更有興趣看你的文章,而不是那些一段話的第一句就雲裏霧裏,更不要說後來的內容的文章了。

  如何寫雅思寫作的主題句

雅思大作文四個評分標準的第一個就是Task Response(任務迴應情況,以下簡稱TR),即,切題。

衆所周知,雅思大作文題目都是由題乾和寫作要求(疑問句或者陳述句)組成的,比如:

題目1:

Some people think that governments should invest more in teaching science.

Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

顯然,爲了切題,題乾和寫作要求都應該在文章主題句中體現出來。否則,寫出的主體段就會出現放在哪個題目下都合適的尷尬局面:輕者考官認爲偏題,重者考官則可能判爲模版,分數可想而知。

一、關鍵詞

“關鍵詞”是題幹中能體現出題意圖的詞或短語,一個核心焦點,即單邊,就有一組“關鍵詞”,如果題幹是雙邊,則用兩組“關鍵詞”表示題幹。那麼如何準確定位關鍵詞呢?毫無疑問,找關鍵詞的前提是讀懂題幹意思,既然能夠代表題幹主旨、出題意圖,那麼在確定關鍵詞之後,假設關鍵詞是“A”,就可以問自己:“這個題目問的是A的原因嗎”、“這個題目問的是A的優缺點嗎?”等。

比如:

Because of traffic and housing problems in the cities, the government encourages business to move to the rural areas.

Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

關鍵詞如果是“traffic and housing problems”的話,那就可以問:“這個題目問的是:原因是交通和住房問題還是其它的嗎”,顯然不是,同樣方法找出關鍵詞是“business move to the rural areas”。

二、最終原因/結果

綜合所有題目中的“寫作要求”,雅思大作文本質是寫出“關鍵詞”的“原因”、“影響”或“解決措施”。不難理解,在找出題幹“關鍵詞”後,如果問原因,那麼以“關鍵詞”爲起點,需要往前推理,得出“最終原因”;如果問“影響”,那麼以“關鍵詞”爲起始點往後推理得出“最終結果”;如果問“措施”,則在推出原因後,提出相對應的解決措施即可。

invest in teaching science(理科)——>理科科目(subjects)就會增加/學習理科科目的人數就會增加——>理科相關科目從業者(practitioners)就會增加——>促進國家相關行業發展

那麼,以“關鍵詞”爲起點的思路就寫出來了,那麼這個題目中的“最終結果”就是:“促進國家相關行業發展”。另外,需要注意的是此過程中箭頭右邊務必是箭頭左邊的最直接結果,否則,在論證過程中會出現邏輯漏洞。

然後,要確保“關鍵詞”和“最終結果”都出現在文章中,該論點的主題句就可以寫成:

If government funding is invested heavily in science, the corresponding sectors of a country would be improved a lot.

比如題目3:

Many people these days work in other countries, taking their family with them.

Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

take family with them——>工作時分心(be distracted)——>工作表現不好(poor performance of their duties)——>令老闆失望(be disappointed)

根據“關鍵詞”+“最終結果”,該題目的主題句是:帶家人出國工作令其老闆失望(The decision to move to another country with their family can make the bosses be disappointed)。不難看出,這樣的主題句仍然會使讀者困惑,達不到段落主題句應有的效果,因爲從關鍵詞直接跨到最終結果跨度太大。

這時可以將中間步驟放在“關鍵詞”+“最終結果”之間,改成:“關鍵詞”+某個“中間步驟”+“最終結果”,那麼該題目的主題句可以寫成:

The decision to move to another country with their family may be highly likely to distract those managers from work, which would make the bosses be disappointed.

主題句關係到主體段落的論證過程是否切題,更關係到考官對於整篇文章內容的定位,相信讀者也已經意識到了段落開頭句的重要性。希望考生勤加練習,最終可以寫出準確恰當的主題句。

  雅思寫作大作文主題句示例及講解

主題句在西方的書面語裏面是很重要的。

舉個簡單的例子,在文章some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay any tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 關於是否要交稅,我們中國的說話習俗是: 我們要交稅,這樣政府有錢,有錢就可以建設公共設施,比如說學校,醫院,這樣人們的生活就可以更好,促進了經濟社會的發展。而西方的習慣是:我們要交稅,這樣大家可以生活的更好,社會經濟都可以發展。因爲政府有了錢就可以投資很多的公共設施,比如說學校,醫院。所以,在我們的雅思寫作中,主題句的寫作就很關鍵。要注意的是,主題句要和段落的內容一致。

我們今天給大家展示一篇學生的作文,其中明顯的問題就是我們的主題句問題。這篇作文的題目是:Advertisements play a major role on TV in market economics. Despite the benefits of such information, many people criticize the role of TV advertising. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their view?

我們來看一下學生的作文。

Advertising, as a major method of companies to publicize their products, has come to people’s vision more and more frequently and I don’t think it’s an actually good thing for us.

On one hand, TV advertisings certainly provide much information about new product for consumers, whereas most of that information is useless. Facing so many junk advertising when watching TV has raised audiences’ continuous complains. The advertisings interrupt TV programmes and spoil people’s enjoyment of the show. At times some channels arrange so many advertisings during the gap between programmes. The movie channel, for example, has almost fifteen -minute advertisings between the upper and the rest part of a film, let alone different films. As for teenagers or some adults, whose time are mainly occupied by mobile phones rather than TV, advertisings’ impact may be not obvious. But for those who are accustomed to watching TV, like some senior citizens or young children, watching TV programmes are their major entertainment activities. Keeping changing channels to find a nice programme without playing numerous advertisings is such a difficult thing, which almost drives them mad.

For another reason, the advertisings are designed to make products more attractive to consumers to achieve better effect. Some advertisers will divided into people into different groups and device suitable schemes to people in different groups respectively. However, the advertisings aiming at target population can be seen by everyone comparably, which means that children are exposed to media violence or sexual images at a higher risk. What’s more, children can be influenced by these advertisings easily and no one can promise that they will learn something bad from the advertisings.

從這篇文章中,我們能夠看到學生的第二段的主題句主要是說廣告沒用,而我們後面的段落主要內容是在講廣告影響了我們看電視,所以跟本段的主題句內容完全不符,這就說明我麼你的主題句是有問題的。而我們的第二個理由段中,主題句講的是廣告讓產品更有吸引力了,但是我們的內容卻是廣告的內容可能會影響人,這個依然是不符的。