新GRE寫作指導:The purpose of education教育的目的

教育的目的應該是要創造出一個隔離於外界的學術環境。這樣的環境最理想因爲這樣可以使學生們不受功利的干擾而專注於重要的理念。

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Many people have the opinion that the purpose of education should be to create anacademic environment isolated from the outside world, which would be conducive for thestudents to focus on their studies without being disturbed by the practical concerns. However,as far as I am concerned, it is near sighted to set the students into an isolated academicenvironment, and such opinion is a misconception regarding the purpose of the education.

It cannot be denied that some kind of academic fields need a peaceful and quiteatmosphere indeed, which help the students to give their most attention to their studies tosome extent. To pay more attention on their studies, students have to avoid involvingthemselves into some practical concerns, such as mean ambitions, love of comfort, devotionto material things, all of which would cost them lots of time, and influence their studiesconsequently.

In this sense, it is a good will to create an ideal environment for students to pursue theirstudies. Many universities, colleges and institutions have laboratories with advancedequipment, libraries that allow students access for free, and often offer the scholarship for thosepotential students. The measures foregoing all indicate that the education make its effort toestablish an environment in which students could focus on their academic studies and reducethe disturbance from the outside campus to greatest degree.