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教你4個高分寫作的祕訣

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在雅思寫作備考中,考生比較容易進入的一個誤區就是“題海戰術”。到處收集作文題目,然後每天寫2-3篇,以期寫作水平在能在短期內迅速提高。其實不然,適當數量的寫作實戰練習是必不可少的,但是並非批量生產、機械運動就有效。小編總結了四大寫作高分經驗供廣大考生參考學習,希望考生們可以從題目中以小見大、舉一反三。

教你4個高分寫作的祕訣

  雅思大作文備考--教你4個高分寫作的祕訣

祕訣一:讓步(making concession)

讓步的論證是中國考生較陌生的一個概念,其實在學狀語從句時,我們就學過讓步的關係,先退一步承認一個與自己觀點相反的事實,再轉折給出自己的觀點,否定前者。句型如下:

Although/ though/ in spite of the fact that...…

As is granted/ Admittedly...…

Opponents would argue that...…

舉個簡單的例子,一個男生向女生告白,被女生拒絕,她就會委婉的用讓步的論證來表達自己的想法,她會先承認男生的一些優點,再轉折說自己並不喜歡他。這 樣既能表達自己的觀點,又不至於傷害對方。讓步這種方法的優點爲能較全面的看待一個問題,而且反駁更能有的放矢。具體例子如下:

Eg. People don not believe that saving money is a good idea in modern society.

這個Topic sentence的觀點很明確,存錢在當代社會不是好主意,顯然,用讓步論證的話,我們要先承認存錢的優點,再根據所列有點進行反駁。

As is granted, saving money offers people a sense of security in case of emergency. However, people tend to believe that wise investment can get more profits。

祕訣二:比較(contrast &comparison)

在雅思大寫作中,考生可以拿相同或相反的事物做比較,相同關係叫對照(comparison),相反關係叫對比。此類論證我們重點掌握一些對比對照關係的連詞:

In contrast,by contrast,on the contrary,while,whereas

Likewise, similarly

祕訣三:列數據(raising figures)

句型:

As is reported/ investigated/ researched...…

It is reported that …...

A recent research conducted by...…Bureau reveals that…...

列數據的寫作方法較講道理更有說服力,但是這就需要我們在平時生活中多做積累才能應付列舉考試中出現的各個話題的一些相關數字。

雅思考試中的數據其實可以分成兩大類,一類是有科學依據的,明確記載的數據;另一類是指一些調查報告的數據,如大學生平均一天花多少時間自習,初中生平均一天花多少時間玩電腦遊戲等,這類數據無據可依,考生完全可以自己根據論證內容給出數據,但一定要符合邏輯。我們通過一例來使用列數據的雅思寫作方法:

retired people tend to offer service for the benefits of the family and the community。

要對這樣一個topic sentence做列數據的擴展,我們首先要找到可列數據的點,此題有兩處,一是退休老人的年齡,二是所花時間。結合上述句型,得出論證過程如下:

As is reported, the average time that the retired within the age group above 65 spend on the family and the community is at its length of about 5 hours per day。

祕訣四:引用(quotation)

在雅思大作文寫作論證的過程中,表達一些觀點的時候,如果能拿名人名言來進行論證則更有說服力,說明某位名人的觀點和你的觀點是達成一致,形成共鳴的。但引用要求考生要有相當大的積累,由於備考時間緊迫,此類論證可以少用。

小編特別提醒:引用名人名言就意味着引用別人的觀點,所以只要引兩到三句起到論證自己觀點的作用的話就可以了,點到爲止,而不是中文寫作中,引用越多越好。

  雅思大作文中的精彩範句

According to a recent survey,four-million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

依照最近的一項調查,每年有4,000,000人死於與吸菸相關的疾病。

The latest surveys show that Quiet a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.

最近的調查顯示相當多的孩子對家庭作業沒什麼好感。

No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.

沒有一項發明象互聯網同時受到如此多的讚揚和批評。

People seem to fail to takesintosaccount the fact that education does not end with graduation.

人們似乎忽視了教育不應該隨着畢業而結束這一事實。

Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person’s physical fitness.

許多專家指出體育鍛煉直接有助於身體健康。

Nowadays ,many students always gosintosraptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will rtunately,for most young people,it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.

當前,一提到即將開始的學校生活,許多學生都會興高采烈。然而對多數年輕人來說,校園剛開始的日子並不是什麼愉快的經歷。

In view of the seriousness of this problem,effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

考慮到問題的嚴重性,在事態進一步惡化之前,必須採取有效的措施。

proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.

應該採取適當的措施限制外國旅遊者的數量,努力保護當地環境和歷史不受國際旅遊業的不利影響。

Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus,which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.

許多市民抱怨城市的公交車太少,以至於他們要花很長時間等一輛公交車,而車上可能已滿載乘客。

There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem:the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.

無可否認,空氣污染是一個極其嚴重的問題:城市當局應該採取有力措施來解決它。

An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.

一項調查顯示婦女歡迎退休。

a proper part-time job does not occupy student's too much fact,it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their an old saying goes:All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

一份適當的業餘工作並不會佔用學生太多的時間,事實上,把全部的時間都用到學習上並不健康,正如那句老話:只工作,不玩耍,聰明的孩子會變傻。

Any government which is blind to this point may pay a heavy price.

任何政府忽視這一點都將付出巨大的代價。

An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.

越來越多的人開始意識到教育不能隨着畢業而結束。

When it comes to education ,the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.

說到教育,大部分人認爲其是一個終生的學習。

The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills ,which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.

大部分學生相信業餘工作會使他們有更多機會發展人際交往能力,而這對他們未來找工作是非常有好處的。

It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to fact the dangers of starvation and exposure.

無可爭辯,現在有成千上萬的人仍過着捱餓受冬的痛苦生活。

Although this view is widely held,this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.

儘管這一觀點被廣泛接受,很少有證據表明教育能夠在任何地點任何年齡進行。

No one can deny the fact that a person’s education is the most important aspect of his life.

沒有人能否人這一事實:教育是人生最重要的一方面。

People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.

人們把會使用計算機與人生成功相提並論。