年考研英語作文預測與範文
低碳與環保
構思點撥
圖片中一個小男孩，早已進入甜蜜的夢鄉，電視卻依然在播放，這時候媽媽走過來幫他關了電視，還責備他爲什麼總是忘記關電視。顯然，直觀看來，這幅圖是在告訴我們要節約用電。但是，我們如果從更宏觀，更深層次的角度去思考，這幅圖正是在告訴我們一個流行的生活理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡導一種低碳環保的生活方式。因此本文的內容和結構可如下：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：列舉現象，分析影響；第三段：建議措施，展望未來。
思維拓展
環保話題，例如節約能源、拼車、交通問題等圖片都可以與低碳生活的理念相聯繫，從低碳的角度入手展開寫作。
高分範文
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life. Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development. According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。
To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy. All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。
佳作妙譯
如上圖生動地展示，一個小男孩正在沙發上舒適地睡覺，電視還開着。這時候媽媽走過來幫他關了電視，責怪小男孩又忘了關電視。
這種現象在我們的生活中隨處可見。很多人習慣於做什麼事情都開着電視，實際上並不看。這種習慣會導致電力和能源的浪費，這會導致碳排放。這偏離了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。低碳生活是指，減少碳，尤其是二氧化碳的排放，以保護環境，實現可持續發展。根據統計數據，如果我們每天把開電視的時間減少一小時，則每個月可以減少4. 17千克的碳排放量。
作爲對地球負責任的管理者，我們必須在公衆中推廣並普及低碳的生活方式，從日常生活中的每個細節開始。我們必須要改變爲了獲得短期的快速經濟發展，犧牲長期的環境健康的做法，轉向發展綠色經濟、循環經濟以及低碳經濟。所有這些有效的措施可以幫助我們實現社會發展與自然有序發展之間的和諧。
名師點評
① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡，也可以表達爲 A boy is fast asleep。“soundly and comfortably”這類副詞的加入，使得描述更生動活潑，而不是單調的主謂賓。
② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。
該句主幹結構是：A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。
這個句型的含義是：一件事情正在發生(正在睡覺)，突然發生了另一件事(媽媽來關電視)。
“with the television on”： with 引導的伴隨結構，即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on. 也可以寫成伴隨狀語A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。
“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”，這句是媽媽關電視的伴隨動作，一邊關電視，一邊責怪孩子忘記關電視。
圖畫描述這句，寫得越精彩越好，這句是先入爲主的句子，也是閱卷老師重點看的句子。
③ are used to doing: 習慣於做某事，使用短語表達，地道準確。
④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:這是2005年真題閱讀中的原句，的文章裏面的句型，引用的標準到位。
一般而言，環保類話題，都可以用這句話，引出第三段的個人評論。
歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫，我們一定要充分利用，舉一反三。二、網絡的利與弊
到底聽誰的？
思路點撥
本圖中，一個女孩正在因一個問題感到困惑，“10牛的水是否產生10牛的浮力？”。於是她上網求助於網友，網友的答案更是五花八門，說對說錯的都有。女孩更加困惑。由此可見，這幅圖反應了這樣一個現實：網絡文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以這樣設計：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：網絡的利+舉例，網絡的弊+舉例；第三段：提出建議措施——取其精華，去其糟粕。
思路拓展
所有利弊型的文章，均可按照本範文提供的思路進行論述。例如，城市化的利與弊。大學擴招的利與弊等。
高分範文
Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online. Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①. It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。
The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows. On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience. For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on. On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③. For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating. Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。
In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time. On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided. Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。
佳作妙譯
如圖所示，圖片中一個女孩正在網上問一個問題，來自於網友的答案差異太大了，以至於女孩很困惑到底該聽誰的。很明顯，人們面臨困境的時候上網提問的現象已經成爲一種時尚。
這幅圖所隱含的意義可以闡釋如下。一方面，因特網爲我們提供了很大便利。例如，通過百度等搜索引擎鍵入一些命令、點擊幾下鼠標，我們就可以獲得幾乎各個領域的知識。另一方面，由於因特網上有海量的信息，很難區分好的信息和壞的信息。例如青少年可能會把錯誤的信息誤認爲是正確的，其結果是非常具有毀滅性的。網上的一些不健康信息也可能會給人們帶來負面影響。
總之，一方面，充分利用因特網來提高效率，節約時間，這很重要。另一方面，應該採取有效的措施教育人們去排除網上不合適的甚至錯誤的數據，以免被誤導。只有這樣，網絡才能更好地爲我們的生活、學習和工作服務。
名師點評
① so… that 句型：如此……以至於……。
② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet: 這是2004年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型。
③ it can be difficult to tell good information from bad: 這是2003年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型。可見，充分了解真題閱讀，對於提高寫作的幫助作用也很大。
④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work：倒裝句。
倒裝句的寫法(部分倒裝)：
原句：The net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way。
only放在句首，把情態動詞can和主語交換一下位置就寫成了倒裝句。三、醉酒駕車與安全意識、社會責任
醉酒駕車與安全意識、社會責任
思路點撥
圖畫中一個已經喝得爛醉如泥的司機，車頂上還馱着一瓶巨大的啤酒，汽車卻依然在路上飛馳。雖然這幅圖有點誇張，但是它卻反映了一個觸目驚心的安全問題：醉酒駕車。寫作時可以按照以下的脈絡展開論述：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：分兩個分論點進行論述：提高安全意識、提高社會責任感；第三段：建議措施、強調後果。思維拓展
實際上，本文的內容和行文思路，不僅僅適用於醉酒駕車，還適用於所有關於安全事故和社會責任的圖片話題。
例如，火災、漏油事故、施工事故、違反交規等等一系列與安全或社會責任感相關的話題，都可以參考此文。
只需要把第一段中間那句圖畫描述替換掉即可。
參考下圖片：
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高分範文
What a scary and sensational scene it is! In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car. What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。
The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility. For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities. Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice. So life is to be respected and awed②. It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence (DUI)③. For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility. We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us. It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。
In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail. Besides, the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。
佳作妙譯
這是一幅多麼可怕的觸目驚心的場景啊！在這幅圖中，爛醉如泥的司機正在馬路上飛速行駛，車上還頂着一大瓶啤酒。這幅圖所傳達的意義，對我們國家的每一位成員，都具有現實和警醒的意義。
這幅栩栩如生的圖畫的深刻意義可以從安全意識和社會責任感兩個角度闡釋。一方面，安全意識應該是我首要重視的問題。生命是一次單程旅行：你不能經歷兩次生命。所以我們應該敬重生命、敬畏生命。由於醉酒駕車的疏忽而宣告任何一條生命的結束是殘忍的、不人道的。另一方面，作爲這個社會負責任的一員，我們每個人都應該去承擔社會責任。我們不僅僅是爲了自己活着，我們也爲那些我們所愛的和愛我們的人活着。無論是聲稱司機的、還是受害者的生命不重要，都是不負責任的。因爲這會給他們的家人和親戚帶來巨大的悲痛和沉重的生活負擔。
簡言之，官方應該制定立法措施嚴厲地懲罰醉酒駕車的司機，例如吊銷駕照或進行監禁。立法措施勢在必行。此外，電視、收音機、網站等大衆傳媒應該共同努力來提高公民的安全意識和責任感，以降低交通事故的發生率。
名師點評
① as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一個遊蕩者。實際上是一個比喻，相當於漢語中的爛醉如泥。用語非常形象生動，一個酩酊大醉的司機形象躍然紙上！
② Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice：非常富有哲理性，語言優美、地道。respected and awed: 敬重和敬畏，語言簡潔、有力、到位。
③ DUI: 醉酒駕車，也可以寫成：drunk driving。
④ leaving…:動詞的ing形式作伴隨狀語。句型經典。四、大學生就業
大學生就業：放低姿態、平常心做人
思路點撥
在畫中，一位正在找工作的年輕女孩，毫不猶豫地拒絕了一份服務崗位的工作，不屑一顧地說：“伺候人的工作我不幹”。這幅圖表明，很多年輕人找工作時，眼光過高，不切實際，沒有用平常心對待就業問題。實際上，可以先就業後擇業。所以這篇圖畫作文可以這樣創作：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：兩個角度分析這種現象的原因：志存高遠，不願意從底層做起；好逸惡勞；第三段：建議措施：教育年輕人要腳踏實地；根除好逸惡勞的思想。
思維拓展
關於平常心態做人、腳踏實地的話題還可以有很多，例如城市選擇問題、院校報考問題、專業選擇問題、股市問題，均可以從這個角度出發，進行展開論述。請參考下圖：
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高分範文
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, the job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation, complaining that she will never take a job of serving others①. At the same time she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society②。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life③, especially on campus. On the one hand, many job-seekers are reluctant to take jobs that they consider to be humble and trivial, such as being a secretary or an assistant, because they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success. What is amazing is that they are not conscious that ambition is to be achieved step by step④. On the other hand, wanting to gain more but pay less, both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid, relaxed and comfortable. This kind of “no work, all play” attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development. We should not look down upon service industry, the third industry, because it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions⑤。
Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation. For one thing, an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that “the longest journey starts with a single step” and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life. For another, the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young. Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved⑥。
佳作妙譯
正如上面的漫畫所示，這個找工作的女孩毫不猶豫地拒絕了一個服務崗位，她還抱怨一直找不到工作。同時她還納悶爲什麼在如今找個有前途的工作這麼難。
這種現象在我們的生活中隨處可見，尤其在校園裏更加明顯。一方面，很多求職者不願意從事祕書或助理等工作，他們認爲這些是卑微且無足輕重的。他們有更大的抱負，想直接登上成功的頂峯。可是他們沒有意識到理想抱負是需要一步一步實現的。另一方面，很多失業者和畢業生都想少勞多得，想得到一份輕鬆舒適而且薪水不菲的工作。這種“好逸惡勞”的生活態度對個人和社會的發展都是很不利的。我們不應看不起服務業，第三產業，因爲它確實爲我們提供了很多工作機會和職位。
因此，採取一些必要措施來改善這種情況已經是當務之急。一方面，應該發起一場教育運動來普及這種“千里之行，始於足下”的理念和腳踏實地的生活態度。另一方面，要把懶惰的思想從青少年的思想中根除。只有這樣人們才能更好地實現自己的人生價值，才能讓失業率大幅下降，才能實現社會和諧。
名師點評
① complaining that she will never take a job of serving others: 伴隨狀語。
② why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society: 這個句子充當了整個句子的賓語，叫做賓語從句。
特殊疑問詞why, what, when等引導的賓語從句必須使用正常的陳述語序，不得使用主謂倒裝的形式。
例如，這句就不能寫成：why is finding a promising job so difficult in modern society？finding a promising job是主語。is是系動詞。
再如：I don’t know what his name is。
絕對不能寫成：I don’t know what is his name。
③ 2008年真題閱讀選項中的句子。
原句爲：Political compromises are easily found throughout the U. S. history。
稍加改動，變成了一個個性化的句子引入第二段內容的模板，雖然沒有華麗的辭藻，但是非常精彩和純正。
④ be conscious that: 意識到，that後邊必須接完整的主謂賓結構。
這個表達等同於be aware that，可以進行同意替換。
此外：be conscious of 和be aware of 在意思上也等同於這兩者，表示意識到。
但是：be conscious of 和be aware of後邊要接單詞或者短語，一般不能加句子。
⑤ the third industry: 第三產業，是service industry(服務業)的同位語。
同位語其實一般都是廢話，等同於前面的詞。
巧妙地使用同位語，可以把單調的句子變得錯落有致、抑揚頓挫。
it does provide us with: does在句中表強調，翻譯成“確實”。
⑥ Only in this way can… realize… and can… be… and thus can… be…：排比句，短促有力，氣勢強大，使得對未來的展望顯得信心十足！
普通的被考生用爛了的這個句型：Only in this way can we live in a harmonious society，被本文的作者巧妙地改寫成了一個精彩的排比句。五、節約資源
儲蓄水滴，儲蓄幸福
思路點撥
本圖描述的場景是一副令人喜聞樂見的圖畫，圖畫中，一隻可愛的小豬造型的儲蓄罐，正在接住自來水裏滴下來的水滴，像存錢一樣，存儲水滴。實際上，它儲存的不是水，它儲存的是幸福。我們可以看出，人們有了節水意識。但是，從正在滴水的水龍頭看，還是有人忽略了節約用水這一問題。因此，本文可以這樣寫作：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：分析有些人浪費水的心理，並闡述水資源的寶貴；第三段：建議措施。
思維拓展
實際上，積極正面的圖片寫作，和揭示負面現象的文章沒有什麼本質上的區別，只要我們筆鋒一轉，就能把它繼續按照原來的套路寫。
本文也可以從低碳、環保的角度出發進行寫作。
關於節約能源的話題，都可以按照這個行文思路和語言模式進行展開。
參考下圖：
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高分範文
Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource. Actually, water resource is very limited and precious. It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①. Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。
However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②. For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users. Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others. In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③. Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture. And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water。
Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken. On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water. On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted. To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。
佳作妙譯
水資源一度被誤認爲是一種無限的可再生資源，實際上，水資源是非常有限且寶貴的。有幸的是現在公衆開始關注這一問題了。如圖所示，一隻可愛的快樂小豬存錢罐積攢着水龍頭裏流出的每一滴水，就像存錢一樣。
然而，水資源短缺問題仍然威脅着全人類的生存和發展。浪費水的現象在日常生活中仍然隨處可見。例如，經常有粗心大意者忘記關水龍頭。更有甚者認爲自己繳了水費就有權浪費，與他人無關。事實上，水資源不僅在生活中必不可少，在工農業生產中也是不可或缺的。水資源是全人類共同的財富，很難想象當沒有水的時候世界會是什麼樣子。
雖然越來越多的人已經認識到了這種緊迫性，但是仍然要採取進一步的措施。從宏觀層面上講，全世界應該共同努力反對浪費水。從微觀層面上講，要進行廣泛的宣傳活動。比如在電視臺播出關於如何節水的節目。節約用水就是存儲幸福，只有節約用水才能爲子孫後代存儲更好的生活。
名師點評
① It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention: 來自於2005年閱讀真題，原句是這樣的：Fortunately, the White House is starting to pay attention。
歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫，廣大考生一定要學會充分利用這寶貴的資源！
② 第二段開頭，用了一個轉折詞，也就是“起承轉合”中的所謂的“轉”，把這篇作文改造成了一篇社會問題型作文，也就是大家最擅長寫的作文。
③ In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it: 倒裝句，表語提前，句子倒裝。
倒裝句寫法：
第一步：寫正常原句：Water is so precious that we cannot afford to waste it。
第二步：表語precious提前。
第三步：主謂倒置，變成So precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it。
普通的so… that… 句型，也能被化腐朽爲神奇，成爲鑽石加分句型！
④ indispensable: 不可或缺的，替換important的一個很好的詞彙。
順便講一個英譯漢的技巧：大家可以看到，在譯文中，這句話被翻譯兩次：必不可少、不可或缺。
因爲原文中出現了：not only… but also，所以這個單詞被拆開翻譯成了兩個近義詞，以使行文更加通順。
⑤ what the world would be like：注意賓語從句必須用陳述語序。
⑥ become aware of: 意識到。意思和用法都等同於be conscious of。後邊接詞語。
⑦ 非常重要：一般而言，歷年真題中談到的正面話題，或者人生哲理類的文章，有可能題目要求會變成：
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
(1) describe the drawing briefly,
(2) explain its intended meaning, and then
(3) support your view with an example/examples。
也就是第三段並非發表個人評論(建議措施)，而是舉例，這時候就需要我們去調整一下文章的敘述方法。
這種情況下，我們可以把結尾段調整爲：
Examples of people’s increasing awareness on saving water can easily be found anywhere in our life. On the macro level, the whole world is making a joint effort to fight against waste of water. On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, can be seen nearly anywhere and every day. In short, to store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。
這樣的話，結尾段就從建議措施，變成了論證文章的示例。
可見，隨機應變，對寫好考研作文也很重要。六、面對人生與社會：樂觀與豁達
面對人生與社會：樂觀與豁達
思路點撥
圖畫中的一隻小綿羊，正呆在一塊大石頭的陰影下面。但是它樂觀、豁達地認爲，有陰影，那麼就說明有陽光。這幅圖無疑向我們傳達了一種健康的人生哲學：樂觀生活、達觀處世。由於這是一篇人生哲理類文章，所以文章安排可以相對自由一些：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：利用正反舉例論證悲觀與樂觀的差距+總結句；第三段：倡導一種樂觀生活、達觀處世的人生態度和人生哲學。思維拓展
本文也可以從世界觀、人生觀的角度入手。
相反，如果是一幅表明悲觀厭世的圖片，我們也可以採取同樣的手法進行處理。
高分範文
As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that where there is shadow, there is sunshine①. What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。
As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism. If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life. Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough. If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while② the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half. Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings③ toward the same life。
There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists. Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude. What’s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective. As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up. Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of Shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”④
佳作妙譯
上面的漫畫清楚地表現出這隻山羊不顧陰影的威脅仍然保持樂觀，因爲它相信有陰影的地方就一定有陽光。圖片中反映的問題是積極的和富有啓發性的。
我認爲作者要表達的意義是要提醒我們保持樂觀心態的重要性。如果漫畫中的山羊終日悲觀地生活在陰影中，它將永遠無法獲得舒適和幸福的生活。類似的例子千千萬，但是我認爲下面的例子就足夠有說服力。如果這裏有半杯水，悲觀的人會抱怨只剩下半杯了，而樂觀的人在慶幸還有半杯可以喝。顯然，面對同樣的生活，他們會有不同的感受。
毫無疑問，樂觀者擁有更高的幸福指數，而悲觀者永遠也體會不到。因此我們必須以積極的態度面對生活。而且樂觀的情緒能強烈地感染他人，這就意味着如果我們以樂觀的視角面對周圍的朋友們，他們也會同樣地樂觀。於是，樂觀和幸福的氣氛自然而然地就建立起來了。因此，讓我們把著名詩人雪萊的名句銘記在心吧：冬天來了，春天還會遠麼？
名師點評
① where there is shadow, there is sunshine: 這句話讀起來是不是很熟悉？
沒錯，它正是仿寫了我們非常熟悉的諺語“Where there is a will, there is a way”：有志者，事竟成。
作者將這句話仿寫得惟妙惟肖，可見作者對語言駕馭是何等的嫺熟。
② while: 表示兩種現象的對比、反差，常翻譯成“而”。
③ perceptions and feelings: 近義詞疊加。
近義詞疊加也是一種向閱卷老師展示自己語言能力和詞彙量的一種極爲有效的手段。
翻譯：只翻譯出一種意思即可。即，這兩個詞合譯爲：感受。
④ Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”
全文的點睛之筆，堪稱經典。
首先：keep sth. in mind 這個詞組用得很地道。
其次：引用了雪萊的詩歌，表現出了深厚的文化底蘊。
第三：the famous line=“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”即後者爲前者的同位語。
同位語的介入，使句子結構錯落有致，層次分明，朗朗上口。
第四：著名詩句“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”淋漓盡致地詮釋了樂觀的生活態度。
實際上，歷年真題的閱讀中又何曾沒有出現過這種模仿呢？廣大考生可以去查閱2007年text 3中的最後一句：The financial fallout has begun, and the political fallout may not be far behind。
⑤ 非常重要： 本題題目要求最後一段也可能會變成：
support your view with an example/examples。
這時候，我們可以把文章的結尾改寫爲：
Examples of optimistic attitude toward life can easily be found anywhere in our world. How would have Zhang Haidi, suffering from the high paraplegia, made such glowing achievements in life, without her strong mind and optimistic attitude? Facing the serious diseases and hardships in life, she did not choose to hold back. Instead, she has been courageous and optimistic enough to defeat them. She has set an excellent example for us.十、弘揚民族文化
弘揚民族文化
思路點撥
圖片中共有三個內容：陶瓷花瓶、功夫熊貓、麻將牌。這三種形象都是典型的中國元素。正如圖片的名稱“歐洲的‘中國熱’”所說，一種學習中國傳統文化和漢語語言的熱潮正在歐洲悄然興起。毫無疑問，本圖的主題是：弘揚中國文化，以及中國國際形象、國際地位的上升。全文行思路可如下：
第一段：分別描述圖畫中體現出的中國元素；第二段：分析外國人對中華文化的興趣提升的原因+舉例；第三段：對待民族文化的正確態度。
思維拓展
保護文物、文明遺產、名勝古蹟的圖片也可以從捍衛和弘揚民族文化的角度入手加以分析論證。參考下圖：
參考圖片
高分範文
In the picture, we can see that there are some vases made of china, which are typical products in China since ancient time. An image of a panda playing Kung Fu① is carved on the surface of the vases, in which both Panda and Kung Fu are the symbols of Chinese elements. Besides, the Chinese mahjong which is growing out of a vase is also a typical Chinese element。
It is obvious that the main purpose of the picture is to reflect the phenomenon of “China fever”， referring to a foreign passion and enthusiasm② on Chinese elements, especially culture. There are reasons accounting for the growing interest in Chinese elements. For one thing, for the past decades, China has made conspicuous progress in all fields such as economy, science and technology, and comprehensive strength of China has been enhanced greatly. For another, due to the progress, China presents a new image to the world and is becoming increasingly attractive and appealing③ to the whole world. Nearly every day news stories are reported and broadcasted④ about what is going on in and around China. And By 2010, there are 72 Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture⑤。
Toward this kind of “China craze”， we should hold a right attitude. On the one hand, we should take pride in the “China craze” by foreigners, which originates from the increasing prestige of China. On the other hand, it is the responsibility of each Chinese citizen to popularize and promote excellent traditional Chinese culture and guard a favorable image of our motherland。
佳作妙譯
這幅圖中我們可以看到一些瓷制的花瓶，這是中國自古以來的典型產品。瓶身上畫着一隻正在練習中國功夫的熊貓，熊貓和功夫同樣是中國文化的代表。此外，花瓶中長出的“麻將”也是典型的中國元素。
這幅漫畫的主要目的是反映“中國熱”的現象，即國外對中國元素尤其是中華文化的一種追捧和熱情。國外對中國元素興趣上升的這種現象是有原因的。首先，過去的幾十年中，中國在經濟、科技等各個領域都取得了顯著的進步，中國的綜合國力已經大幅提升。另一方面，由於這些進步，中國以嶄新的形象出現在世人面前，在全世界越來越有吸引力。幾乎每天都有很多關於中國及其周邊正在發生的新聞報道。截止到2010年，已經有26個歐洲國家建立了72所孔子學院來傳播中國語言和文化。
對於這種“中國熱”的現象我們應該持有正確的態度。一方面我們應該爲外國人的“中國熱”感到自豪，這源於中國聲望的提高。另一方面，弘揚優秀的中國傳統文化和捍衛祖國的形象，是每一位中國公民的責任。
名師點評
① a panda playing Kung Fu: 正在練中國功夫的熊貓。其中playing Kung Fu 是後置定語修飾panda。
現在分詞作後置定語的寫法：
第一步：寫出定語從句：a panda that is playing Kung Fu；
第二步：把引導詞“that”和be動詞“is”一起省略；
② passion and enthusiasm: 近義詞疊加，加強語氣和氣勢。
③ attractive and appealing: 近義詞疊加，加強語氣和氣勢。
④ reported and broadcasted: 近義詞疊加，加強語氣和氣勢。
⑤ Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture: 其中“established… culture”是Confucius Institutes(孔子學院)的後置定語。寫法：請參考《商業行賄》點評第①條。
七、商業行賄
商業行賄
構思點撥
上圖表現的是在“尚方寶劍”嚴懲的威嚴下，一位從事商業賄賂的人落荒而逃。不言而喻，這幅圖反映的是當今一種比較猖獗的社會現象：商業賄賂。深層次來講，就是道德問題、責任問題。本文的內容和結構安排如下：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：從兩個角度分析影響+分析動機；第三段：建議措施。
思維拓展
此類文章可以展開的角度有：金錢觀，商業道德建設、職業道德建設，公平競爭。相似的圖片比比皆是。請參考下圖：
參考圖片
高分範文
There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts a negative but rampant scenario in modern society: commercial bribery. Frightened by the sharp punishment sword, the man, carrying a large pile of money used as bribery①, is trying his best to escape. What is conveyed by the drawing is both realistic and thought-provoking。
The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of the decline of work-moral values and the view on money. For one thing, commercial bribery has a very damaging and destructive② effect on the whole society. Firstly, moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness revealed in the action of bribery③ may stain and pollute the atmosphere of professional ethics and cause others to copy. Secondly, fair competition may be threatened because bribery puts honest businessmen at a disadvantaged position. For another, the bad behavior of commercial bribery is largely driven by “profit”， showing that those people who are involved in bribery do not have a right view on money. It is true that money is indispensable④, but, there is no denying that money should be obtained and spent in a reasonable, wise and legitimate way。
To eliminate the immoral behavior of bribery thoroughly⑤, drastic actions should be taken and severe punishment measures should be adopted. Besides, a positive mental guidance on the right attitude to money should be popularized among the public. Only in this way can we have a fair and sound social environment。
佳作妙譯
毫無疑問這幅漫畫生動地描述了現代社會一種負面的但是卻十分猖獗的現象：商業賄賂。由於懼怕嚴厲的懲罰，這個人揹着一大堆賄賂用的錢落荒而逃。漫畫的寓意是十分現實併發人深思的。
上圖的寓意可以理解爲詳細闡述了在金錢衝擊下職業道德的淪陷。一方面，商業賄賂對全社會造成惡劣的、毀滅性的影響。首先在賄賂行爲中表現出的道德缺陷和人性弱點會破壞和污染職業道德的氛圍，不良分子也會效仿。其次，行賄者將破壞公平競爭，誠信經營的商人被置於不利地位。另一方面，商業賄賂行爲大多是被利益驅動的，這說明這些人對金錢沒有正確的態度。沒有金錢的確是萬萬不能的，但對待金錢，無疑需要取之有道，用之有度。
爲了徹底根除賄賂這種道德敗壞的行爲，應該採取嚴厲的懲罰措施。另外，應該在公衆中逐漸普及正確的金錢觀。只有這樣，我們才能擁有公平、健全的社會環境。
名師點評
① money used as bribery: 過去分詞作定語=定語從句。
寫過去分詞做定語的步驟：
第一步：寫成定語從句：money which is used as bribery；
第二步：省略引導詞“which”和be動詞“is”變成money used as bribery。
這樣，一個定語從句就變成了過去分詞做定語。
② damaging and destructive: 近義詞疊用，押韻：頭韻
③ revealed in the action of bribery: 過去分詞作定語，修飾前面的moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness，寫法參考本文點評第① 條。
④ It is true that money is indispensable: It作形式主語，真正的主語是that從句。
⑤ To eliminate the immoral behavior of…: 爲了……。作目的狀語。八、城市交通
城市交通
思路點撥
此圖片描述的是一幅交通堵塞的場景。圖片中，車一輛接着一輛地堵在街上，各種抱怨聲不斷。毫無疑問，這幅圖反映的是城市交通的壓力問題。同時，汽車過多就意味着尾氣排放過多，所以這幅圖同時又反映了環保和低碳問題。
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：分析交通堵塞給人和環境帶來的影響；第三段：建議措施。
思維拓展
建議措施部分，還可以從如下角度提出：
呼籲政府：投資完善基礎設施、繼續堅持限行的制度。
倡導低碳出行：步行、騎自行車。
倡導理智選擇城市：人全部擁擠在大城市帶來的負面影響。
高分範文
How horrible the traffic is! The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street. In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①. Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses. Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。
Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays. With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen. Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment. On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait. Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road. On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③ has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。
Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam. Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④ should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate. Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。
佳作妙譯
交通狀況真是一團糟！這幅漫畫描述了街上糟糕的交通堵塞的場景。實際上，交通堵塞嚴重到了一定程度，與其說這是一條擁擠的街道，還不如說這是一個停車場。焦急的乘客等不到數量稀少的公交車，而私家車卻到處都是。
雖然這幅圖有點誇張，但是當今這種現象並不罕見。私家車的增多必然產生大城市交通堵塞。大城市沉重的交通壓力會給人民生活帶來不便，也會對環境造成負面影響。一方面，一旦發生堵車，原來很近的路程似乎變得十分漫長，除了等沒有別的辦法，大量的寶貴時間被浪費在路上。另一方面，汽車排放的尾氣更增加了環境的負擔、導致了碳排放，這和低碳生活的理念相違背。
因此，應該採取有效措施緩解嚴重的交通堵塞問題。第一，通過提高稅費限制私家車擁有率(保有量)。第二，應該鼓勵和推廣低碳的公交車、地鐵等公共交通工具，以便我們擁有更順暢的交通。
名師點評
① it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B的結構，通過字面可以理解成：更多的是A而不是B。
翻譯的時候，往往翻譯成：與其說是B，不如說是A。
反過來，當我們想用英語表達“與其……不如……”的時候，我們可以採用這個結構。
實際上，這個結構在歷年真題閱讀中曾多次出現。如2000年Text 3中的選項：Futurist poetry is more of a transient phenomenon than literature。
② With the number of private cars increasing: with 短語表伴隨，翻譯成“隨着”。
③ exhausted gas emitted by cars: 其中emitted by cars是過去分詞短語作後置定語。
相當於定語從句：gas which is emitted by cars(被汽車排放的尾氣)。
寫法：請參考《商業行賄》點評第①條。
④ taxes levied on the sales of private cars: 其中levied on the sales of private cars(針對私家車被徵的稅)，爲過去分詞做定語。寫法：請參考《商業行賄》點評第①條。九、科技與生活
科技與生活
思路點撥
圖中描述的是武廣高鐵的開通，給城際交通帶來了極大便利。表面上看，它反映的是城市與城市之間距離被“縮短”的問題，但是更深層次來講，是科技帶來了這一切，所以這幅圖可以有兩個切入點：城際交通、科技改變生活。本文作者選取了第二個角度爲主要論述視角。
第一段：圖畫描述；第二段：兩個角度論述科學技術是第一生產力；第三段：提出建議、展望未來。
思維拓展
科技的話題，實際上是映射熱點問題：上海世博。
世博的主題“城市讓生活更美好”，其中一個側面就是城市與科技。
可以反映“科技”主題的圖片有很多，如現代通訊、網絡等。
例如下圖，表面上看是反對迷信，深層含義實際上就是崇尚科學。
崇尚科學
高分範文
As is vividly depicted by the picture above, a traveler happily starts his journey by high-speed railway from Guangzhou to Wuhan. In the year of 2009, Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway went into operation, reducing travelling time from 12 hours to 3 hours, bringing much convenience to the transportation between the two cities①. No wonder the caption in the picture says “with the Wu-Guang high-speed railway, cities far away is just like a place nearby”。
Science and technology are the primary productive forces② and have been playing a key role in the national economy development. On the one hand, progress in science and technology has promoted economic and social progress greatly. Take the high-speed railway as an example. Firstly, the railway becomes a new engine③ of booming of regional economic. Secondly, the railway helps to attract a lot of tourists, so that tourism in these cities flourishes. Last but not the least, the load of the existing transportation network can be released to a great extent. On the other hand, with the development of science and technology, such as the operation of high-speed transportation, video phone, webcam meeting, the world has become smaller and smaller。
It has long been a tradition for Chinese government to attach great importance to the advances④ in science and technology. Science and technology has successfully shaped an entirely new image of China on global stage via the two grand world events, 2008 Olympic Games and 2010 Shanghai World Expo. It is strongly advised that young people should devote themselves into the study of science and technology for “better city, better life”。
佳作妙譯
如上圖所示，一位旅客從廣州踏上了去往武漢的高速鐵路。2009年，武廣高鐵正式建成通車，將兩地之間的行程從12小時縮短到3小時，極大地方便了兩地的交通。難怪這幅漫畫上寫道“有了武廣高鐵，每個城市都在家門口”。
科技是第一生產力，在國民經濟發展中扮演着重要角色。一方面，科技的進步促進了經濟社會的快速進步。高速鐵路就是鮮活的例子。首先這條鐵路成爲地區經濟發展新的引擎。其次鐵路吸引了大量遊客，這些城市的旅遊業隨之繁榮起來。再次這條鐵路很大程度上緩解了現有線路的運輸壓力。另一方面，隨着科技的發展，高速鐵路，視頻電話，視頻會議等應用會越來越多，世界將變得越來越小。
中國政府一直很重視科技的發展，通過2008北京奧運會和2010上海世博兩件盛事，科技成功地重塑了中國在世界舞臺上的國際形象。因此青少年要懷着“城市，讓生活更美好”的信念，積極投身到對科技文化知識的學習上。
名師點評
① reducing…, bringing…: 並列的兩個現在分詞短語作狀語。
② Science and technology are the primary productive forces: 科學技術是第一生產力。這是任何一篇與科技相關的文章都可以用的萬能句型。
③ a new engine: 一個新的引擎，這是一個形象的比喻，把科技對經濟發展的動力表達得非常具體、形象。
涉及到科技、發展、環境等題目時，不可避免的就需要用到發展這個詞，本文中 “發展”，多次出現，作者採用了多樣化的詞彙： “development(n。)”，“progress (n。)”，“flourish(v。)”，“boom(v. /n. )”，“advance”。
這類詞彙還有： “prosperous(adj。)”，“improve(v。)”等。
近義詞的多種替換方式，使得文章在統一中富於變化。廣大考生可以把這些詞彙積累下來，應用到自己的寫作中去，也能起到妙筆生花的效果。
④ 如果題目要求最後一段舉例，則我們可以把文章的結尾改成例子：如手機、因特網等是如何提高了生活效率的。
