雅思作文放棄那些錯誤的中式寫法
雅思寫作中很多同學常常會在不自覺中帶入中式英文而不自知。很多考雅思的同學會有因國內教育產生的中國式英語通病，這些都是我們寫作中應當避免的~下面是小編爲您收集整理的雅思作文放棄那些錯誤的中式寫法，供大家參考!
1. a lot of/lots of
這對詞組一般不要出現在academic essay中，考官已經看煩了。可以用A considerable number of代替
2. Everything has two sides/every coin has tow sides
說了跟沒說一樣，明顯的事實，以後也不要用了
(小編忍不住咆哮：這句簡直太熟悉了啊!)
3. Recently
這個詞不好。按照他們的說法就是too imprecise，沒有一個具體的時間。可以用 In the last 5years…/since…代替
4. There is survey……
老師是這麼說的:has there been?/only say this if you actually know of one也就是說考官知道這些都是你編的，最好不要用了
5. And， because， but
這三個詞我們還是經常會用到。其實最好用in addition， therefore， however等代替
6. 不能用vivid 來形容world
vivid可以用來說memories或者是dream之類的
7. No one can deny that…/Undoubtedly
這2個詞組太絕對了，用來開頭並不合適。 其實每個人都能持與你意見相反的態度
(小編微微一笑並沒有說話)
8. in a word
很多人會用它來做conclusion。 鬼佬的意見是:如果你準備用這個詞組來引出你的觀點，那你最好用一個詞來概括，誰讓你是這麼寫的呢
while
don’t use in general academic writing or for task 2―but it is ok for describing a process in task 1
10. Nowadays
理由和3差不多， 這個詞用在文章裏顯得太普通了， 老師的原話是it does not mean very much
(離開了Nowadays簡直不會寫開頭_(:з」∠)_)
11. It is a well known fact…
最好不要用， 有的考官會扣分
12. advantages and disadvantages
換成merits and drawback和pros and cons
13. In my opinion， I dis/agree with this
這是多餘的表達。 When stating your opinion you follow with a fact相信大家都能看懂，就不翻譯了
14. IELTS文章中千萬不能用縮寫
例如I’m 在考場上別犯懶，平時最好也別寫縮寫，多多注意，養成習慣
15. very
very不能用來形容delicious， lovely， fantastic， wonderful， amazing， gorgeousand huge。
16. human being
MS這個詞指的是動物+植物， 以後可以用man kind代替
17.閱讀老師告訴我們，只要出現極端詞彙的題，99%都是錯的
如果這條成立，爲什麼在自己的作文裏還會出現什麼
as we all know?
it can not be denied?
除非你真的列舉一些不可推翻的事實，比如：中國是世界上人口最多的國家――可是太過事實的事實，往往對你的作文毫無用處，就比如：every coin hastwo sides。都是寫可寫可不寫的廢話。
以上就是雅思寫作中一些常見的中式英語彙總。希望大家平時寫作儘量避免這些用法，寫出更地道的表達來。
雅思寫作精選範文 城市化對文化帶來的影響
each civilization experiences the process of being born, culminating and decaying. there is an ever-increasingly strong declaration that the variety of languages and cultures on the earth are fading into history at an astoundingly fast pace. the extinction of languages and cultures is may possibly caused by many kind of reasons - wars, natural catastrophes, infectious diseases. i would like to present two main reasons for the loss of them.
as we can see in newspaper and tv programs, the world globalization is the chief cause for the death of minor cultures and languages. due to the fast development of modern vehicles, the ever-increasing international commercial and trade connections among countries provide the best chance for the mainstream ideology and language to intrude the traditional ones.
take the famous international corporation macdonald for example. since the first macdonald was opened in beijing, in 1980, there have been nearly thousand of branches have been built in just 20 years long time. indeed, the appearance of macdonald has brought chinese a lot of benefits from delicious fast food to new conception of international enterprise. meanwhile, it also changed the structure of chinese traditional diet and lifestyle. the greasy fast food caused several social problems, which have the typical american characteristics such as overweight and waste of food. therefore, a single enterprise presents us the very tremendous influence, be it negative or positive, the globalization has brought to the traditional culture and language.
besides the extrinsic reasons for the decay of traditional cultures, it might be noted that the intrinsic shortage of this language or culture is also the important matter causing this phenomenon. aboriginal languages in some region only comprise of limited characters, which cannot well express all the meanings people want to communicate. and, some native customs or habits was too ferocious or lake of support of science. with the vast pressure from outside, it cannot resist the intrusion of modern civilization and is heading towards disappearance of its language culture.
taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that according to the fast steps of globalization and some objections weak cultures and languages natural had the loosing of it is inevitable. perhaps, now, nothing is more important than collecting the multimedia data and goods to demonstrate that a certain civilization has experienced birth, culmination and decay on the earth.
