4種典型的雅思寫作錯誤 千萬要避免

寫作是我們內地考生比較擅長的一個部分，對於其他雅思考試部分來說。但是這並不代表很多考生就能取得高分，有很多考生還是會犯下一些錯誤，比如觀點表達不清，結構沒有邏輯性。下面是小編爲您收集整理的4種典型的雅思寫作錯誤千萬要避免，供大家參考!

　4種典型的雅思寫作錯誤 千萬要避免

Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

觀點一： it might cost a lot when moving large companies and factories, since it will prove difficult to operate business in remote areas.

錯誤：是否容易做生意，帶來經濟效益並不能夠解釋是否應該將公司或者工廠移到市郊去。因爲文章只在乎是否能夠解決住房和交通問題，至於其中的經濟得失不在文章討論之列。

觀點二：it is nearly impossible to move large companies and factories at once, for most of companies are large in size.

錯誤：能不能夠將工廠和公司移到市郊也不在文章討論範圍。題目很明顯已經作出一個假設，就是把公司和工廠搬到市郊是完全有可能的，目前所關注的是這個做法是否可以解決住房和交通問題。

觀點三： sceneries are gorgeous at the countryside, and newcoming factories will injure the local environment.

是否影響當地環境造成污染並不重要。解決交通問題和解決污染問題沒有任何關係，即便交通會產生污染問題!

Do you think old buildings should be broken down, and give place for modern buildings. How are the old buildings important in our society?

觀點一： some old buildings attract multimillion tourists every year (such as the Great Wall), so to demolish it will mean a loss to the city where it is located.

本觀點從旅遊觀光或者考古的角度說古老建築並沒有錯，可是錯在沒有理解Building的含義，Building 不同於construction, 長城纔算 construction。這道題和很多常見的雅思題不一樣，就是考到了某種名詞的確切意思，考生日後到了國外的大學會寫很多essay, 而寫一篇好的essay往往第一段就要解釋或者界定文章題目的某個核心名詞。我第一次看到上述的題目時，我的反應就是商業用樓，住宅用樓，工業用樓，而不是長城，金字塔，埃菲爾鐵塔，因爲Building的意思是a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place(摘自WORLD字典);有的考生或許會覺得在考場上沒有字典去翻查一個名詞，是不是很不公平，因爲一篇嚴謹的文章需要資料去論證。然而，大家忽視了Building是一個非常簡單的單詞，它的詞義已經到了常識的地步，如果這樣的單詞不認識，而產生審題的偏差，考不到理想分數也是當然。

觀點二：old buildings are valuable assets for those archeologists to study the human activities before the War, since some records had turned ruins .

本來古老建築可以用於考古價值無可厚非，但是是否只適合分析戰爭之前的人類行爲就值得商榷。這句話最大的問題就是把古老建築看作是考古學家唯一可以利用的物體去分析戰爭之前的人類行爲。改正的方法很簡單，把before the War去掉。

　　雅思寫作詞彙--常見替換詞整理

1.重要的：important, key, crucial, critical, significant, vital, substantial, indispensable, imperative

2. 解決：solve, deal with, cope with, handle, resolve, address, tackle

3. 損害：damage, hurt, injure, harm, impair, undermine, jeopardize

4. 給予：give, offer, render, impart, provide, supply, afford

5. 優勢：advantage, merit, virtue, benefit, upside, strength

6. 缺陷：disadvantage, demerit, drawback, downside, weakness

7. 使迷惑：puzzle, bewilder, perplex, baffle

8. 培養：develop, cultivate, foster

9. 認爲：think, believe, insist, maintain, assert, conclude, deem, hold, argue, be convinced, be firmly convinced, be fully convinced

10. 保護：protect, conserve, preserve

11. 確保：assure, ensure, guarantee, pledge

12. 有害的：bad, harmful, evil, detrimental, baneful

13. 要求：request, demand, needs, requisition

14. 消除：eliminate, clear, remove, clear up, take away, smooth away

15. 導致：lead to, bring about, result in, cause, spark off, conduce to, procure, induce, generate

16. 因此：so, therefore, thus, hence, consequently, as a consequence, accordingly, as a result, because of this, as a result of this

17. 增長至：grow to, rise to, increase to, go up to, climb to, ascend to, jump to, shoot to

18. 降低至：dip to, fall to, decline to, decrease to, drop to, go down to, reduce to, slump to, descend to, sink to, slide to

19. 保持穩定：level out, remain stable, remain still, remain steady, maintain the same level, remain unchanged, stay constant, level off, keep its stability

20. 急劇地：dramatically, drastically, sharply, hugely, enormously, steeply, substantially, considerably, significantly, markedly, surprisingly, strikingly, radically, remarkably, vastly, noticeably

21. 宣稱：allege, assert, declare, claim

22. 發生：happen, occur, take place

23. 原因：reason, factor, cause

24. 發展：development, advance, progress

25. 有益的：useful, helpful, beneficial, profitable, rewarding, advantageous,

26. 影響：influence, impact, effect

27. 明顯的：clear, obvious, evident, self-evident, manifest, apparent, crystal-clear

28. 佔：comprise, take up, account for, constitute, consist of, make up, occupy, hold, compose

29. 對比而言：by contrast, on the other hand, on the contrary, conversely,

30. 展示：show, reveal, illustrate, demonstrate, depict, present, represent, describe

31. 大約：approximately, almost, about, around, nearly, roughly

32. 事實上：practically, in practice, essentially, in essence, in reality, in effect, in fact, as a matter of fact

33. 換言之：namely, that is to say, in other words, to put it like this, to put it differently, to put it from another angle